Writing for love is a pas

I thought it was really deep. I liked how you explained how we are killing earth. I also liked how you compared earth to a dream. NICE WORK.

I really liked it. Like tennisprincess said, the passion was great. Please, keep writing.

I liked the purpose of the story, but I'm a little confused. Why is the cat counting by one-thosands?

I know. When I repeat three steps ahead over and over again, it got on my nerves, but then I took them all out, and it didn't make any sense. ...

I'm sorry, but this is just my opinion. Don't take offense. I though it was horrible. I couldn't catch the flow OR the rhthym. :smt102

I really liked the flow and the descriptivness of this. It's awesome!

Thanks =]

I got confused. It sounds like you were talking about something else besides pears.

You are a very deep writer. I like it.Oh yeah, welcome to YWS. have fun, and i enjoyed your poem!

Shank you very much! :smt041

It's kind of a repetitive poem. No offense, but those types of poems drive me insane. :smt048

I liked it. nicely done, awesome!

I really enjoyed it. I like reading poems when people vent, because I know that that is what's coming from them. Nothing else, just them. So, my opinion is, KEEP ...

I liked it. Nice poem about being different and showing true feelings towards the world.

Really good story. I don't like rapists either. They are sick perverts. :x